The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australian share of the Japanese tourist market.
The bar graph illustrates the number in millions of Japanese travelling overseas over a period of 10 years between 1985 and 1995 , while the line graph gives information about the proportion of Australians toward Japanese' tourist market.
Overall , The first graph shows the Japanese tourists who increased in number over a decade , whereas the second graph also showed an upward trend in the distribution of Australian in Japanese travelers.
On the first chart, just above 4 million of Japanese traveled in other country in 1985 and rose to nearly above 11 million after 5 years. Then it sligh...
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