The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The chart below shows the reasons of adult decision to study, and also the pie chart shows the share of costs of adult education.
Form the chart it can be easily seen that the greatest reason for study is interest in subject which is 40 per cent, and leads in the chart. Additionally, it can be noted that to gain qualifications is slightly different from the first reason, and its index shows 38 per cent. To improve prospects of promotion and enjoying learning are sharing the same percentage, to be more precise 20 per cent, which comes after helpfulness for current job. Finally, the smallest percentage belongs to meeting people, with the index of 9 per cent.
The pie chart shows the percentage of the costs of each course, and people think that the biggest part, accurately 40 per cent. Subsequently, 35 % belongs to employers and 25% taxpayers.
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Characters: 683 1000
No. of Different Words: 83 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.488 4.0
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
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