Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions.

Essay topics: Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions.

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Gone are the days when people were prosperous regarding health. Nowadays, changes in the lifestyle on account of modernity have contributed greatly to trigger several health problems to mankind especially children. The problems among adolescent like obesity, weak optics, psychological and physical weakness, lower immune system, spinal problem are on the rise. It has been very difficult for today's societies to combat with health issues. Here, i will establish causes and some remedies to address this global concern.

to commence with, there are multifarious reasons behind unhealthy offspring. First and foremost, the enormous pressure of increasingly study work, competitiveness to excel in ...

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if I have 5 ideas how much I will deserve ??

You will not get higher marks because you have more ideas.

Better to have two to three ideas in 5 paragraphs:

para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
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