A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factry near our community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory ? Explain your position

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factry near our community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory ? Explain your position

Industrialisation is demanded all over the world and many developed countries are always try to expand their industries and their annual economy. This progress in industrialisation is also seen in developing countries too. As people are getting more conscious about having urbanisation in their native place. So, that they can connect themselves with the world and able to acces facilities provided by the world wide tradfes.

Industrialisation was never spread more in my community a decade before because my town was hidden from the eyes of businessman and economic pressures. Therefore, we never had iany industry in our town for a decade but now, we can connect ourselves with people of different areas so, quickly thorough multimedia that our town is not hidden anymore. Small industries are setup here and recently a large company is going to build near my community.

Generally, industrialisation has advantages for everyone like there will more employment and a better livelihood for people, urban facilities will increase which help us to connect with the other parts of the world more correctly, all the global goods will come in our nearby market thus, creating a town with more developed infrastructure, more organised market and sophisticated buildings with world class products.

So, this industrialisation changes life of people very drastically and it helps in communities development too and it will have an economic impact in country's overall development.

Although, it is worth having large companies around our communities but there is also a negative side that somtimes make us think about this development not in support of human life.Firstly, large company will occupy large area in our community that will take land from farming and from gardens or extra land thta will cause discomfort to the community's people.

Secondly, there will be an increase level of pollution of all kind that will make our peaceful community suffering from industrial pollution which make our place full of many pollution based diseases and this will also decrease the beauty of our place.

Thirdly, due to more demands of workers by company people from other parts of our country are given work and living place here and most of these workers bring their own culture to our community and this will reflect presence of different culture on the same place.

Moreover, these disadvantages are inevitable by the world global market and some how, it doesn't hace such effect on community directly as explained by experts and naturalists. Community will get effected but slower than the rate of advancement, it will have currently after a company's settlement in our area.

Even governmnet has norms that companies has to provide the annual pollution done by them and companies can't dump their waste anywhere in the surrounding place, they need to take some safety measures about their pollution and they have to make attempts for lowering pollution in that area.

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Sentence: This progress in industrialisation is also seen in developing countries too.
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Sentence: As people are getting more conscious about having urbanisation in their native place.
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Sentence: So, that they can connect themselves with the world and able to acces facilities provided by the world wide tradfes.
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Sentence: Therefore, we never had iany industry in our town for a decade but now, we can connect ourselves with people of different areas so, quickly thorough multimedia that our town is not hidden anymore.
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Sentence: Generally, industrialisation has advantages for everyone like there will more employment and a better livelihood for people, urban facilities will increase which help us to connect with the other parts of the world more correctly, all the global goods will come in our nearby market thus, creating a town with more developed infrastructure, more organised market and sophisticated buildings with world class products.
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Sentence: So, this industrialisation changes life of people very drastically and it helps in communities development too and it will have an economic impact in country's overall development.
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Sentence: Although, it is worth having large companies around our communities but there is also a negative side that somtimes make us think about this development not in support of human life.Firstly, large company will occupy large area in our community that will take land from farming and from gardens or extra land thta will cause discomfort to the community's people.
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Sentence: Moreover, these disadvantages are inevitable by the world global market and some how, it doesn't hace such effect on community directly as explained by experts and naturalists.
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Sentence: Even governmnet has norms that companies has to provide the annual pollution done by them and companies can't dump their waste anywhere in the surrounding place, they need to take some safety measures about their pollution and they have to make attempts for lowering pollution in that area.
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