Computer games are supported by many families for their children becouse of their benefits. while other think that computer games are harmful for children. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Computer games are supported by many families for their children becouse of their benefits. while other think that computer games are harmful for children. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this rampant age of globalization, the lifestyle of human beings is gaining ground swiftly in this jet age of 21st century. some people claim that, the standard of children's lifestyle is being mushroomed day by day by advantages of computer games.By contrast, others have conflicting views.Here,i would like to establish my view both sides with my perception.

To set in, there are manifold advantages of computer games. First and foremost,now a days,lots of computer games are played by offsprings like as K.B.C,Sudoku and many more which furnish a great deal of knowledge about mathematics, general knowledge, calculation and so on.As a result,they get a good result as well as they can participate in competitions.Furthermore,it enables us to get amusement and relaxation when they feel tired, burden of study.Therefore, they play computer games.So,they feel fresh, active, get rid of stress.Adding to it, in the computer games, they have to under go difficult stages.Thus it enables to get wining spirit, will power and so on.So, computer games are fruitful for offsprings.

BY contrast,there are ample draw back of computer games.Initially,Now a days,offsprings like to play violent games based on murder,robbery,stealing and many more.Therefore,they adopt violent behavior and try to imitate actions and stunts of games in their real life which is harmful for their characters. What is more, computer games tempt children to play them for prolonged which keep their concentration away from real study. In addition, more and more computer games are played by children as they victimize health problems such as eye sight,spinal and soon.Hence offsprings have to suffer many ailments.

From my notion, computer games have both pros and cons for children. These games upgrade the standard of lifestyle.on the other hand, these games emerge many problems as children face many ailments. i will say that both parents and teacher must offer a perfect guidance to their offsprings about best use of computer games for their better future.

In a nutshell, having examined the pros and cons of computer games. i would like to establish that, the developers of games must not produce violent games as well as parents should stimulate their children to use positive sides.

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