Is consumer really a king ?

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Is consumer really a king ?

consumer play an indispensable role for the prosperity of every company. All companies spend lot of money only for consumers . many people say that,consumers are really a king .I totaly agree with this term.

First and formost,consumers are those people ,who spend money to buy any thing. shopper always treat as a king they get lot of benefits in every field.An example can be supportive for my point of view that, when customer go at shop for shopping ,owner of shop oftenly offer many type of discount offers.they also give them free gifts on shopping.on the other hand,probably ,they also spend higher amount for the attraction of customer.like, on infrastructure of shops,malls and exorbitant.however,they want to outdo their income of sources.in this way,they treat their customer as a king

To the other end of spectrum,customer plays an significant role for the economic growth of country.many online shopping sites are also available,they provide homedelivery , only for their customer.in this era,many type of advertisements are also advertised by different companies.they spend lots of money on advertisements .To illustrate that,they hire expensive models,actors and other for adds,only for the attraction of the customers because,it is the best way for the promotion of their products.

To put it in nutshell,I pen down saying that,consumers always gets lots of benefits for every products.companies offer different kind of packages for consumers.

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Sentence: consumer play an indispensable role for the prosperity of every company.
Description: The fragment consumer play an is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace play with verb, past tense

Sentence: An example can be supportive for my point of view that, when customer go at shop for shopping ,owner of shop oftenly offer many type of discount offers.
Description: The fragment customer go at is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace go with verb, past participle

Sentence: All companies spend lot of money only for consumers . many people say that,consumers are really a king .I totaly agree with this term.
Error: totaly Suggestion: totally

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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 241 350
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.94 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.983 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.047 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 40.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 29.662 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.469 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.797 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5