the current interest in famous people’s private lives has negative effects both for those people and for society as a whole. Newspapers should not be allowed to publish details of people’s privet lives unless it is clearly in the public interest.
To what extant do you agree or disagree?
It is not true that the famous privet lives has negative effects both for people and for society . I mostly disagree with this idea.
At first, one cannot deny that, people are more interesting about the famous people specially about their privet lives if we look at the world exactly, we see that in all countries every mount have published magazines only about famous people such as: superstars, famous politic, athletic and etc…. For example, glamor magazine , which is reported details about people’s privet lives .
Another reason it is thought that why newspaper allowed to publish this kind of matter is attract people because they are interested to read. Moreover, this may strategic to earn higher for newspaper. Another point of view is that, like other jobs being well known have a lot of conflict and gossip clearly is one of them.
In conclusion, people love the famous and always are very keen to know everything about people’s privet lives.
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Sentence: For example, glamor magazine , which is reported details about people's privet lives .
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