The diagram below gives information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows how frozen fish pies are made in a factory.
The fish pie contains of such ingredients as peas, potatoes, sauce and salmon fish, it is also contained in a microwavable container. There are two main product delivery lines – one for potatoes and another for the fresh salmon. However, there is one clear difference between these two lines – potatoes can be held in storage for up to one moth while salmon can only stay up to 12 hours, so the fish is delivered more frequently.
When salmon is delivered it is sprayed with lemon juice and salt is added. Later it goes through ...
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