The diagram below shows nitrogen sources and concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feauters Write at least 150 words

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The diagram below shows nitrogen sources and concentration levels in the groundwater of a coastal city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feauters.

Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrate details of coastal city groundwater with present nitrogen sources and concentration level.

In coastal vegetation, due to the rainfall two reaction happens which constitute as nitrogen source in the soil that are nitrogen oxidisation by lighting which causes ammonia degassing. Another reaction is nitrogen fixation by vegetation which causes denitrification in the soil.

In domestic and market gardens, nitrate act as a nitrogen source which is taken by the soil particles due to excess use of fertilizers and discharge of household liquid wastes in soil.

Industrial waste which are discharge in storage tanks and in ponds help in increasing the concentration level of nitrogen in the soil. Similarly, waste disposal in landfill also help in increasing the concentration of nitorgen in the soil.

The concentration of nitrogen in groundwater is directly proportional to colour density and overall,flow of groundwater is in the direction of oceans and this flow takes all these nitrogen sources and excess of nitrogen away from the soil and discharge it on the ocean from were this cycle was started.

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Sentence: The diagram illustrate details of coastal city groundwater with present nitrogen sources and concentration level.
Description: The fragment diagram illustrate details is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace illustrate with verb, past tense

Sentence: Industrial waste which are discharge in storage tanks and in ponds help in increasing the concentration level of nitrogen in the soil.
Description: The fragment Industrial waste which is not usually followed by are
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Sentence: The concentration of nitrogen in groundwater is directly proportional to colour density and overall,flow of groundwater is in the direction of oceans and this flow takes all these nitrogen sources and excess of nitrogen away from the soil and discharge it on the ocean from were this cycle was started.
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Suggestion: Refer to from and were

Sentence: In coastal vegetation, due to the rainfall two reaction happens which constitute as nitrogen source in the soil that are nitrogen oxidisation by lighting which causes ammonia degassing.
Error: oxidisation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: degassing Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Another reaction is nitrogen fixation by vegetation which causes denitrification in the soil.
Error: denitrification Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: In domestic and market gardens, nitrate act as a nitrogen source which is taken by the soil particles due to excess use of fertilizers and discharge of household liquid wastes in soil.
Error: nitrate Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Similarly, waste disposal in landfill also help in increasing the concentration of nitorgen in the soil.
Error: nitorgen Suggestion: nitrogen

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.349 7.5

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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 7 9
No. of Words: 177 200
No. of Characters: 935 900
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 3.7
Average Word Length: 5.282 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.016 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.349 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.143 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.534 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.909 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.246 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5