Dieting Does Not Help People Lose Weight

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Dieting Does Not Help People Lose Weight

Nowadays dieting is the main part of our life in modern society. This is one of the biggest complaints of most individuals that are overweight. So many people fail at losing weight because they use them wrongly or they do not struggle sufficiently. Some people would like to go on diet, but they do not have enough experiences or time, So is the problem that dieting does not help people losing weight or we must search the problem on humans. On the one hand it can help some people, on the other hand diet is not always successful for everyone.

First of all majority of people especially working class persons go on diet although they can not pursue it.Their daily meals consist of fast foods. Secondly they use diets to be in shape but do not consider their health.A person who eats oily food, or drink alcohol is more overweight than others. Secondly another issue is that Large percent of dieters lose weight but they feel depressed and gain it back. Furthermore it might be dangerous for body.

On the other hand Other people do safe and effective way. It is through old-fashioned exercise and right diet. They understand that it is impossible to lose weight by simply cutting food from your diet or taking some pill.

To sump I would like to say that it depend on us. Struggling with it can be a very serious issue. The quality of our life and how live is to a great extent in our own hands.

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Sentence: To sump I would like to say that it depend on us.
Description: The fragment it depend on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace depend with verb, past tense

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