Discuss the importance of organization in urban life?

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Discuss the importance of organization in urban life?

Almost everyone in urban life is a part of organization. People work in military or in any civil institute. Organization helps to build personalities in many ways. Man is target oriented; he is either a good team member or a team leader; he develops punctuality and regularity.

Organization makes person target oriented. Every organization has certain targets to achieve. Every member has to try to achieve these targets; he has to plan at than up life all efforts to give results. This habit helps him in his personal life and person keeps planning and then achieving targets. By contrast, a person who is not target oriented, has no targets in his life and he does not achieve anything in his life.

Organization makes person a team leader or good team member. In every organization, employees are following some targets so they have to as a team. Person learns if he is a team member that how to coordinate with others. Moreover, if he is a team leader so he learns how to coordinate with team. This learning helps a person a lot he knows how to be a good part of the society and his leadership qualities helps him to lead his family.

No employee, no matter cannot work in any organization, if he is not punctual and regular. Therefore, an organization teaches a person the value of time and knowing the value of time, person becomes successful in his life.

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