Diwali

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Diwali

Diwali of deepawali is also known is fastival of light and it is on important fastval in hindu, jain and sikn religion and celbrated for five days. this festival is celbrated ofter 21 day of dusshera. it is celebrated as the return of lord sri RAM to ayodhya after 14 years in exile. people clean and wash their houses on Diwali, some people paint their houses and some people open their Windows to welcome goddess of wealth lexmi ji and illuminate earther lamps condles in their house as à token of welcome to laxmi ji with light and people decor thier house and prepare rangoli also. it is believed that lexmi ji enters into cleen and spatless house. people wear new cloths take delicious food and blow crackers and exchange gifts and sweet wite each other they prepare varieties of food. childern by the crackers in the night the cheldern enjoy crackers. thé old people hug the each other. in morning time hindu apply kumkum or thier forehead and worship goddess laxmi ji.

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Sentence: Diwali of deepawali is also known is fastival of light and it is on important fastval in hindu, jain and sikn religion and celbrated for five days. this festival is celbrated ofter 21 day of dusshera. it is celebrated as the return of lord sri RAM to ayodhya after 14 years in exile. people clean and wash their houses on Diwali, some people paint their houses and some people open their Windows to welcome goddess of wealth lexmi ji and illuminate earther lamps condles in their house as token of
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Sentence: welcome to laxmi ji with light and people decor thier house and prepare rangoli also. it is believed that lexmi ji enters into cleen and spatless house. people wear new cloths take delicious food and blow crackers and exchange gifts and sweet wite each other they prepare varieties of food. childern by the crackers in the night the cheldern enjoy crackers. th old people hug the each other. in morning time hindu apply kumkum or thier forehead and worship goddess laxmi ji.
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Error: cleen Suggestion: clean
Error: spatless Suggestion: spotless
Error: cheldern Suggestion: children

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No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
No. of Words: 173 350

Minimum 250 words wanted.

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para 1: introduction.
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 2 15
No. of Words: 173 350
No. of Characters: 792 1500
No. of Different Words: 105 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.578 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.113 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 1 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 86.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.5 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.764 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.764 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.17 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5