Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Parents as human who have big gun with my life is important pupil for me because they always with me since i was born. Eventhough, I totally disagree with this statement which is Parents is the best teacher of our life. In my opinion the best teacher in humanities life not always parets because not a few human have oportunity have family who care with them. However, the best teacher of my life is my experience. Likewise I would describe bellow.
First of all, I would say which impression taugh us everything. We had something we have been through from our own life and everyone actually must have it. Society around the world can be sucsess with their experience. They know the step by step how to achieve the top of their target. They found the way by their self. They absolutely know how do they fall instead wake.
By following example, we can see everyone who now plentiful, their past was not good at all. For instance one of famous Indonesian mucision, Sandy Sandoro, He strarted his journey from zero. Before he becomes a great talented mucision as now, he tryed to get risk went to Jermany to do his schoolarship. He was just street mucision before. But with his experience we can see who is he now, the man who is circling by at least 10 million fans around the world and have a lot of money.
Another example, Why I said impression is the best teacher of us. It was because I felt that. In my life, my relatives especially my parents act such as my trainer not my teacher. My family gave me the manner how to be a good learner, how to be responsible, how to be a good human and the rest. On the other hand, I have to learn and know everything from my own journey. My parents gave me the way and I have to continue it. Now, I got my own way. I had a lot of experience than my friend around of my age. For example, i traveled to several countries around Asia and I got many achievments while i was school.
In summary, each people had diffrent chance and way to learn anything. So, try to find more experience in your life and you can get more awareness by your own style. Do not waste it because oportunity strikes only ones.
Sentence: Eventhough, I totally disagree with this statement which is Parents is the best teacher of our life.
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Sentence: First of all, I would say which impression taugh us everything.
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Sentence: In summary, each people had diffrent chance and way to learn anything.
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Sentence: In my opinion the best teacher in humanities life not always parets because not a few human have oportunity have family who care with them.
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Sentence: First of all, I would say which impression taugh us everything.
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Sentence: Society around the world can be sucsess with their experience.
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Sentence: For instance one of famous Indonesian mucision, Sandy Sandoro, He strarted his journey from zero.
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Sentence: Before he becomes a great talented mucision as now, he tryed to get risk went to Jermany to do his schoolarship.
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Sentence: He was just street mucision before.
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Sentence: For example, i traveled to several countries around Asia and I got many achievments while i was school.
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Sentence: In summary, each people had diffrent chance and way to learn anything.
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Sentence: Do not waste it because oportunity strikes only ones.
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