Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching
television is bad for children. Use specific details and examples to
support your answer.
Everyone possess known television that possess function is a good for children. Television can be meant as getting knowledge or becomes someone else. But what television is to be knowledge. Several societies think that they just look at the tube will be brought negative effect to their children. I can totally disagree and I will give some reasons and example for that statement.
On the advantages viewpoint, if you have born, you are certainly seeing your parents. They touch you everything their knowing. Beside this, television is one of media which is teaching you such as education. Elizabeth is one of woman who is a smart because she always studies from television. She can be finished her studying in university-Harvard when she was only 22 years old. The tube gives kind of lesson.
On the other hand, there are numerous communities who become clever, If they see television. Did you ever hear about Les S. Gara?. He could be finished her learning in university-Boston. He were got undergraduate program faster and he was obtained as Japanese-person. He just got education from several books, and he got knowledge from the tube. Thus, television is one of thing which need numerous people.
Possessing many books or reading numerous books is not a ensuring to be bright. People need an away to get it. For example, person who have be smart using smart phone to learn. Like saying say that there are numerous away to go Roma. There are many ways to be smart, but you just need a procedure, even if we possess all of brand books.
To summarize, we need a book to become people-smart. However, television can help us to increase our education.
Sentence: Everyone possess known television that possess function is a good for children.
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I can totally disagree and
I totally disagree and
Sentence: People need an away to get it.
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Sentence: For example, person who have be smart using smart phone to learn.
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Sentence: Like saying say that there are numerous away to go Roma.
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