e-mail has had huge impact on profession and social community what this impact has been nagtive as well as positive do the advantage of using e-mail outweight
in this rampant age of globalization science has invented numerous electronic gadget such as laptop and mobile phone which are being used for send e-mail some people repute that e-mail has had great contribution on both natural and legal person however , this contribution has been positive like wise worse here, i would like to establish view for both side that have pros and cons of using e-mail.
To set in,there are several point to support my view the primar of e-mail is revolutioned it allow us to keep touch with society by sending e-mail which are leading to kinship relationship among community Moreover, electronic e-mail economizes and time cost which help us to chat with new face, friends, kith-kins therefore it enable us to maintain old and new friends circle after college Furthermore, at present,this kind of software is more improved and include the option of video message which is more common for business meeting through e-mail can business dealing done in set at their home.
On the contrary '' every soward has two edge'' some time younster see sexual images so they get feeling of excitement at an early age that bad for character of young people Moreover they are spending too much time to sending e-mail so they can not concentration on their study As a result the academic performance of youngsters will be reduced so its matter of worry for parents. From my notion, it allow people to sending large amount of information whenever and whatever on the contrary some time we have to face network problem so they have to skip many significant information.
In a nutshell after doing a great deal of thought and deliberations with my self we should use e-mail to send business related information rather than miss use
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Sentence: From my notion, it allow people to sending large amount of information whenever and whatever on the contrary some time we have to face network problem so they have to skip many significant information.
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Sentence: To set in,there are several point to support my view the primar of e-mail is revolutioned it allow us to keep touch with society by sending e-mail which are leading to kinship relationship among community Moreover, electronic e-mail economizes and time cost which help us to chat with new face, friends, kith-kins therefore it enable us to maintain old and new friends circle after college Furthermore, at present,this kind of software is more improved and include the option of video message
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Sentence: On the contrary '' every soward has two edge'' some time younster see sexual images so they get feeling of excitement at an early age that bad for character of young people Moreover they are spending too much time to sending e-mail so they can not concentration on their study As a result the academic performance of youngsters will be reduced so its matter of worry for parents.
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