Education is recognized as vital to the future of any society in today’s world. Government throughout the world should make education compulsory for all children between the ages of 5 and 15. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education is the most importance part of human life, without education people cannot predict what their future will be. Government throughout the world should create education compulsory for all children between the ages of five and 15. I prefer agree with this statement.
Indonesia is one of a country that creates policy about education. Indonesia trust that education is as vital to the future. Therefore, it creates one of policy, children in Indonesia should follow education compulsory because they thinking all of people should receive education minimum until junior high school. This policy provides benefit for society especially the poor, usually children from the poor cannot follow education because they do not have much money to join in school, and this policy create them able to follow education. Nevertheless, this policy was able to made the poor became lazy due to people think that their children acquire free education from government.
Besides, why government Indonesia creates policy about education because government in Indonesia believe that when all children have education that they ready to compete to find a job. Hence, they have good future that this will help government to decrease unemployment in Indonesia. Despite, people receive education compulsory that they do not seriously follow their education. Therefore, this policy will be useless.
To sum up, nowadays, education is the most important to prepare for the future. Government should create compulsory education for society. Despite, the government have to control their policy so that the policy will be working well.
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