Electronic waste is a majar problem.why is itproblem and how can we solve it?
Electronic devices such as television,radio,air-canditioner so on has inclined human's efficiency very significantly.To spread knowledge,entertan,to enhance health trough diagnostic and therapevtie way, we depend on distinct electronic devices . Electronic devices, like anythings else in world have their bright and dark side. Here,i would like to establish my views.
To begin with,ever growing technology is hallwork of modern world. It is not the duration but the novelty that influenced the people to replace their new things with the old one. This tend is contributing electronic waste on lar...
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Sentence: Electronic devices such as television, radio, air-canditioner so on has inclined human's efficiency very significantly.
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Sentence: To spread knowledge, entertan, to enhance health trough diagnostic and therapevtie way, we depend on distinct electronic devices.
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Sentence: Electronic devices such as television, radio, air-canditioner so on has inclined human's efficiency very significantly.
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Sentence: To spread knowledge, entertan, to enhance health trough diagnostic and therapevtie way, we depend on distinct electronic devices.
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Sentence: Electronic devices, like anythings else in world have their bright and dark side.
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Sentence: For instance, more than 50million computer are discarded in use anvally.
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Sentence: Some remedial measuses are needed to be taken to solve this problem.
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Sentence: To starts with, current awareness among the masses regarding existing electronic waste and its harmful aspects is low which is thought to be the prominemt reason behind the vast emerged which needed to be solved by creating awareness among the flok.
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Sentence: The solution of electronic waste crisis liss on 'precaution principel'which can be done by minimization eco-friendly products.
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Sentence: In concusion, complex is the issue as it will remain a long-term task to overcome.
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Sentence: But i believe create a cleam and secure furture for our coming generation.
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