ESL sample essay:The Salinity of Ocean Waters

in this rampant age of globalization as we know we are living in 21st century which is very compertive era and education play paramount role in every ones life and without education person like a animals and education is third of human being as well as people do other activities like sports yoga and so on in this way we can maintain our health moreover the students of university consume more time on their study and others think that they should do others activities so I personally incline to with given statement.

To set in, first and foremost students utilize most of the time on their study as we know study makes a man successful but they spend most of the time on their study and they beyond of our culture and tradition so students should some time do their study and ever and enon do other activities as a result students make a life easy and healthy.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 3 15
No. of Words: 158 350
No. of Characters: 702 1500
No. of Different Words: 90 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.443 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.412 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 41 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 52.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 36.353 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.559 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.711 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5