Essay topic:
The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates a survey of the city sports club members about their opinion regarding some certain aspects of the club.
In general, it is clearly seen that the members among females and males feel positive about the three types of services of the club.
Almost 90% of both sexes are happy about the facilities in the club. In fact, 64% of women and 63% of men are extremely satisfied in this regard, while less than 15% of females and males are negative about this.
In terms of opening hours, female and male members are disagree in this regard. With more than 90%, women express their satisfaction, whereas 37% of males feel unsatisfied with the opening time.
On the other hand, variety of activities is seemed to be liked by men more, which is 90% of them feel happy with the diversity and merely 5% are not satisfied. Meanwhile, for women, the percentage of satisfaction and dissatisfaction figures are both equal with about 30%.
In conclusion, it is evident that the both sex members have different opinion about the three facilities in the club.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Different Words: 99 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.683 4.7
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