Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
It is obvious that our planet is at risk. Nowadays storms, floods and droughts are more frequent than ever before, and loss of species is predicted. This essay shall delve into the way human beings are damaging our planet and also suggestions to solve this problem by governments and people
Governments and people should be aware that we have caused the main part of the climate change problem. However, some environmental organizations believe that although the damage is already done, it is feasible to reduce te consequences whereas others are doomsayers saying that combatting climate change is an uttainable goal.
To beging with, human activities are seriously damaging The Earth. The air is polluted by emissions produced by cars and industries, the soil is being contaminated by factories leaving heavy metals, the overdevelopment of land and deforestation have both been shown to cause soil erosion. Furthermore, our daily lifstyle, such as not recycling or wasting electricity uncontrollably shows that people are taking the warning signs lightly.
Governments are mainly responsible for combattign climate change. They should educate and encourage people to change our habits as well as making environmental and sustainable policies to get rid of pollution and show that tackling climate change is definitely acheivable. Moreover, governments should put pressure on manufacturers to produce more eco-friendly prodcuts. As far as what people can do is concerned, first of all being aware that we are causing serious harm to the ecosystems and secondly changing our way of life are both necessary. Recycling, saving energy and using ecological items are some activities that people can do.
To sum up, the solution to facing and overcoming the climate change is in the public's and the government's hands. It will take a long time but it will definitely be worthwile
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