Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree.
It is true that fast food chains are easily found in numerous countries and becoming more irreplacable in this day and age. Albeit its generally acknowledged benefits, I am of the opinion that this new kind of meal also brings detrimental impact to humanity for some reasons.
First of all, pre-prepared food is inextricably linked to deterioration in people’s health status. Apparently, higher level of obesity is a widespread trend in big cities which is mainly caused by the habits of having fast food. As many international fast food corporations such as KFC, McDonald’s, Burger King and so...
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Sentence: Secondly, fast food possibly jeopadizes family values since it sets superficial trends, causing less interaction among family members in the daily meals.
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Sentence: The situation might get worse if one starts actively following this trend and forgets about his or her traditions and customes.
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