FAST FOOD MADE CHANGE IMPROVED OUR LIFE
Every people has manner different to make food. Sometime they are using various condiments for making something which can us eat, such as, Risotto, Pizza, Gado-gado, and the rest. That all are foods which usually a people to make for eating. Now a days, many restaurant can we found it in the world, so we can not get busy in our life for cooking something else. If we have many money, we can get food which has become easier to prepare in the restaurant without we have to cook in our home. In order to we have many time for doing what we want to do it. And I think, junk food was making change improved the way in our live.
Firstly, numerous people who will be professional cooks with different levels to work in restaurant. They are calling as chef. Sometime, the Businessman was meeting in some place which has a room to enjoy situation. They are just order food what theirwant, and the chef will make food from their order with different flavor as special food. Not only that, the chef can make something special which has good taste, and the price is expensive. Therefore many people want to taste it without have to think before the price.
Secondly, the peoples was using modern electronic equipment. In our home, sometime we want to make juice from fruit, and for making it we can use juicer. Beside that, we can use rice cookers for cooking rice with just plug at electric current, and it can be easy. We have many time for doing something, such as, home work, duty from office, or other activity.
In addition, with the places that provide junk food to make we have many time for spending time outside as hangout together with our friends or business college in that places, such as, KFC, McD, café , and the rest. Beside that, if we have celebrate as party birthday, we can make it in the places which has serve fast food, and just by order, we can make celebrate with easy without must think of confuse dishes.
Finally, every one want make something with easy without he/ she was spending time into do it. And my opinion the junk food is one of technique to make easy in our life, so we were getting many time, and we will usually to do something which has many advantage for our life.
Sentence: Every people has manner different to make food.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to manner and different
Sentence: If we have many money, we can get food which has become easier to prepare in the restaurant without we have to cook in our home.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to without and we
Sentence: In order to we have many time for doing what we want to do it.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and we
Sentence: Therefore many people want to taste it without have to think before the price.
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Suggestion: Refer to without and have
Sentence: Beside that, if we have celebrate as party birthday, we can make it in the places which has serve fast food, and just by order, we can make celebrate with easy without must think of confuse dishes.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and celebrate
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to has and serve
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to without and must
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