Fatherhood should be prioritized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely dedicate for selecting whether or not to have kids leads on to the idea that they are also trustworthy for bringing the children up. I agree with this statement with re

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Fatherhood should be prioritized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely dedicate for selecting whether or not to have kids leads on to the idea that they are also trustworthy for bringing the children up. I agree with this statement with reasons such as happiness life and parents old future.

Firstly, the parents build household to create a good life. Household cannot complete without a child. Children can build an atmosphere in a home more fun with laugh, joke, and their sound. Parents should decide when and how many children they want to maintain. It is not easy to a create decision, and fatherhood is the biggest to take it. He must think deeply about future with his wife and children. The plans are about education and insurance. In education, how prepare them to create good education for children such as good quality school and course or private teacher. Insurance is also significant for children, and parents should plan it earlier.

Secondly, according to quote “more kids, much luck” parents should be proud if they have many kids. Children can bring them in greater future when they get older. But before that, they must maintain their child with better education and environment. These are assets for them to build a happy life. For example, my uncle and my aunt have many kids. It is not difficult for them to maintain kids because parents already prepare before they decide about amount of children, financial, and education for kids. Now, they can live happily without worrying with their financial condition. Those kids now have a great job and repay them.

However, fatherhood should think twice if he wants to have many kids, and motherhood has responsibility either for bringing their children up. If they do not have a good financial, I think they merely only have two children for complete their day life to avoid bad possibilities in the future.

Finally, both of fatherhood and motherhood must carefully to take responsibility together to build their future life with their children.

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Sentence: If they do not have a good financial, I think they merely only have two children for complete their day life to avoid bad possibilities in the future.
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