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Few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries,while the usage of others is rapidly declining.Is this a positive or a negative development?


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By suzain - Posted on 08 August 2013

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Few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries,while the usage of others is rapidly declining.Is this a positive or a negative development?

In today's globalised world language is holding an even greater magnitude. With the passage of time it is seen that less dialects are increasingly spoken in different countries whilst the usage of others is decreasing. It is a positive development and below light will be shed upon my points.

To commence with, a jargon speaking in different countries is responsible for the globalisation. With one language as a common people have the vistas to exchange their views, ideas, etc. , and also to know about different cultures or traditions. It will make the relationship among people around the globe concrete. People interaction will increase and will ultimately there will be more progress in the world. And apart from this, few languages which are annoying in different cultures and one one of them is English -an international language is an official language in the world. Thus, people work becomes soothing and easy with common language. The people will no get any snags in their official works.

Furthermore, dialects which are increasing all over the world is ubiquitous-in devices, books, websites, etc. English is an international language and the main perk of spreading one jargon in through out the globe is that these few languages are the languages of commerce, law, medical, non-medical, etc. Students get the high degrees in these official languages. Thus, it is a positive point and also it can be seen that these are the library languages. Nearly more the half of the books in the libraries are written in those languages which are famous all over the world.

In a nutshell, in my personal pragmatic cognizance there are many benefits of having few languages in the globe as it will assist the upgrading the prestige of humanity.

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Sentence: People interaction will increase and will ultimately there will be more progress in the world.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to People and interaction

Sentence: And apart from this, few languages which are annoying in different cultures and one one of them is English -an international language is an official language in the world.
Description: The fragment one one contains a repeated word
Suggestion: Delete a possible duplicate word:

Sentence: Thus, people work becomes soothing and easy with common language.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and work

Sentence: In today's globalised world language is holding an even greater magnitude.
Error: globalised Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: With the passage of time it is seen that less dialects are increasingly spoken in different countries whilst the usage of others is decreasing.
Error: whilst Suggestion: while

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
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No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 289 350
No. of Characters: 1423 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.123 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.924 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.732 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.643 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.775 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.54 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

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sir i noticed that whenever i write small essays i get less band .. and when i submit my long essays den i usually gets good band........ but sir i was told that in IELTS the word limit is only 250 words in the essays .. then why it is so? is writing in word limit is really important .... can i write long essays too in which i get good bands.?

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No. of Different Words: 147 200

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thank you very much sir it helps me a lot.!