Government Financial Aid for Student Should Be Based Solely On Merit
Financial of government is facilities for student from fee of tax. It given to student for daily activity, but government financial aid for student should be based solely on merit. Why government can do that?
Firstly, not all government to give the financial passed money because they are just thinking of their self. They give financial on merit, but in the fact the merit which they give not perfectly. For example financial by government be based on merit to free fee for school until Junior High School be valid on several school in Jakarta. The schools are still fee by self or fee by their parents.
Secondly, government give scholarship to cleaver student, but they do not look student who did not cleaver. Also, the government do not care with the especially for little size of province which the background be valid to give financial for student by government. If government want to good financial, do not be worthless and must be useless. Financial by government look like not effective, whereas good financial for student will be better for country in the future.
Thirdly, financial based solely on merit by government inflict a financial lose for country or student itself. For example loss of financial for student effect is many school buildings damage if the bad weather coming. Financial by government should uses to the good facilities for student. In other that, they feel comfortable at the study time.
So that, government financial aid for student should not base solely on merit, however they give facilities with the effective care over influence a student to be a good study. If we will able to the good facility, we will a good student too.
Sentence: Financial of government is facilities for student from fee of tax.
Description: The fragment Financial of is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Financial with adverb
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and facilities
Sentence: It given to student for daily activity, but government financial aid for student should be based solely on merit.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to It and given
Sentence: Secondly, government give scholarship to cleaver student, but they do not look student who did not cleaver.
Description: The fragment government give scholarship is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Also, the government do not care with the especially for little size of province which the background be valid to give financial for student by government.
Description: The fragment the especially for is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace especially with noun.
Sentence: If government want to good financial, do not be worthless and must be useless.
Description: The fragment government want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, past participle
Sentence: Financial by government look like not effective, whereas good financial for student will be better for country in the future.
Description: The fragment Financial by is rare
Sentence: Financial by government should uses to the good facilities for student.
Description: The fragment Financial by is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Financial with adverb
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to should and uses
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