The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Different countries' consumer spendings are quite different. The table shows the vary consumer spending on a seires of intems in the five countries, namely, the Ireland, Italy, Span, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
Food, drinks and tobacco were in the most important position on consumer spending in all of the five countries, and in a different percentage. In Ireland and turkey, they were near 30%, while in the other three countries they are under 20%.
Clothing and footwear were the second important consumer spending in these countries. In Italy, they got 9%, and in Sweden, they were 5.4%. In the other three countries, the figure were very similar, all were near 6.5%.
The last consumer spending were leisure and education. In Turkey, they were 4.35%, and the other four countries the figure were under 4%.
In conclusion, it can be said that in 2002, food, drinks and tabacco were the most important consumer spending in the five countries, and the different countries' consumer spending were quite different.
Sentence: The last consumer spending were leisure and education.
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Suggestion: Refer to were and leisure
Sentence: The table shows the vary consumer spending on a seires of intems in the five countries, namely, the Ireland, Italy, Span, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
Error: intems Suggestion: items
Error: seires Suggestion: series
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