The graph below shows the demands for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

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The graph below shows the demands for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The line graph shows the using of electricity units in summer and winter season in England.On the other side the pie chart shows the different purposes of electricity using in English homes.

According to the given line graph, more electricity units are using in winter season. In winter 35,000 units are using in first 2 hours of day. It goes to near 40,000 in third hour and fall down to 30,000 in 10th hour. After that it rises sharply and touches the peak of 48,000 units after 21 hours. Then it drops at starting point at the end of day to 35,000 units.

In Summer 18,000 units of electricity are using by people. This ratio is half to compare winter season. The graph shows a gradually declining to 13,000 till 9 hours. It goes up to 20,000 in 15th hour and after that it shows fluctuating and stay at starting point in the end.

According to pie chart more electricity used in heating rooms and water. It is 52.5 %.
17.5 % units are using in ovens, kettles and washing machines. 15% units use for lightning, TV and radio and remaining 15 % use for cleaning, mixing food and tools.

Overall, it is clear that usage of electricity is more than double in winter season as compare to summer.

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