the graph below shows the percentage in the number of international student in Canada universities between 2001 and 2006.

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the graph below shows the percentage in the number of international student in Canada universities between 2001 and 2006.

The graph reveals the percentage of provinces in the Canada universities who have graduated as international student during five years, from 2001 to 2006.

It can be clearly seen that the number of overseas student generally went up after five years. Thus, it showed that an increase was available in 2006.

According to the graph, New Brunswick and Nova Scotia was in first rank in the number of international student graduating that stood at below or over 7 percent in 2001, while the other provinces just about 3-to-6 percent. Likewise in 2006, the number of graduating in New Brunswick rose by five percent and it was still the highest of graduating. An increase was followed by Nova Scotia and British Columbia in the same amount about 10.5 percent. Quebec province was less by 1.5 percent than two those provinces. Moreover, there were provinces whose has only about 4.5-to-6.5 percent the number of graduated student in Canada University. They were Manitoba and Newfoundland & Labrador in the same amount at 6.5 percent and followed by Ontario at 6 percent. Lastly, the most least is Alberta.

Having been presented in the graph, Alberta was not popular as other provinces in 2006, perhaps declining in number of graduated student in Canada universities from its province during the period!

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