The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from
four different sectors between 1990 and 2007
The line chart shows acid rain emissions in UK from four different sectors in the period of 17 years from 1990 to 2007. The data was presented in the terms of millions of tons.
According to the graph, we can see that the Electricity, Gas and Water Supply sector ha the most signiffficant changes during the period compared to other sectors. It had continually decreased from the highest point of approximately 3.4 millions of tons to about 0.5 points at the end of period with a little increase by around 0.25 between 1999 and 2001.
Similarly, the Other industries and Domestic sectors had declining trends in the period. Yet they only dropped by around 0,75 points for other industries and 0.25 points for domestic sectors compared to the Electricity, Gas and Water Supply sector.
Otherwise, there was not a lot of change in the number of acid rain emissions from Transport and communication sector.
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