Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
The essential aspect which drove people to achieve their goal is happiness. Many students study hard day and night in purpose to fulfill high score and achieve their visions. While some workers give their best in working to get promotion or bonus in every intention to reach their goals as well. It is the way which they believe will bring them to happy life in the future.
However, Psychologist claim that factors to be happy is coming from family, friends, society and own personality. The expert report as the result of their research, sixty per cent of happy person is come from happy family a...
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Sentence: Second factor of happiness that the research found is came from friends and society.
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Sentence: Although many factors of being happy are already studied, the definition of happiness itself is still cannot define clearly.
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