You are hereA healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge and

A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge and


By NewUser - Posted on 21 May 2013

Essay topic: 

A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge and experience

Today’s modern lifestyle comes with long work hours and busy social lives, which has started negatively impacting people’s well-being. To stay healthy one needs combination of a strong body and focused intellect.

Eating balanced food that augments one’s health and boosts immunity is the first big step towards being healthy. Eating well ensures that one gets proper nutrition and stays fit from inside. People living in metropolitan areas in India present a strong case for this reasoning. Most of the people have nuclear families and a fast paced lifestyle. With both parents working extended hours, children have to survive on unhealthy fast food. This forms the stepping stone for ...

Note: Only testbig VIP users can access the full content of this essay.
You can subscribe as testbig VIP users and get unlimited access to essays on the top list; and more advantages...

Average: 7 (3 votes)
This essay topic by other users:
Post date Users Rates More about the essay Sticky
1 year 10 weeks ago dhruv546
Read full essay
2 years 16 weeks ago vvikramvverma
Read full essay sticky icon
More essays by this user:

flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 4.199 7.5

It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/ielts

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 337 350
No. of Characters: 1639 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.285 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.864 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.479 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.85 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.199 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5