How To Be A Beautiful Like Korean Girls

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How To Be A Beautiful Like Korean Girls

Since Korean wave booming in the world, a lot of people curious about Korean style. Such as Korean music, fashion, culture, and how could it be Korean girls has great skin and always look beautiful. As far as I am concerned, I have 3 method how to be beautiful like Korean girls. First is Korean girls always care with her skin, second Korean girls use make up, and the last is Korean girls do plastic surgery.

In my opinion Korean girls always care about herself, they always maintained type of food they eat. For them food it is like medicine. They more often eat vegetable than meat, every body know vegetable has many vitamin and nutrition, it is good for health. Not only that but also Korean girls always doing sport, such as jog, go to gym, and climb the mountain every weekend. It is a reason why Korean girls has great skin and always beautiful.

And second method how to be beautiful like Korean girls is use make up. When they used make up, they never use copious, they always look natural. It is because they are believe use a little better than use more, because it is good for face skin and for your presentation. But not just that they always used skin care such as emulsion, essence, and BB cream. They believe used one by one by process can be has maximal outcome.

The last method is do plastic surgery. Actually, I do not say all of beautiful Korean girls do plastic surgery. But I know in Korea has a lot of clinic of plastic surgery, and the famous of plastic surgery in Korea is double eyelid for make a big eyes and jaw reduction for a make a little face. It because they believe beauty is when people has big eyes and little face. Honestly, I do not agree if people doing plastic surgery. In my opinion beauty is not about your face but about attitude, mind set, and brain.

My conclusion, I have 3 method how to be beautiful like Korean girls are first always eat good food, such as vegetable and don’t forget always doing sport at least one time per week. Second give attention for your skin, and the last is do plastic surgery, but I do not recommend. I think better always think positive about your profile than do plastic surgery.

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Since Korean wave booming in the world, a lot of people are curious about Korean style.
Since Korean wave is booming in the world, a lot of people are curious about Korean styles.

every body know vegetable...
every body knows that vegetable...

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Sentence: But I know in Korea has a lot of clinic of plastic surgery, and the famous of plastic surgery in Korea is double eyelid for make a big eyes and jaw reduction for a make a little face.
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