Hydroelectric dam and water-air generator.

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Hydroelectric dam and water-air generator.

The picture illustrates how the hydroelectric dam works and the process of wave-air generator to produce electric power.

Based on the scene, the energy is the result of turbine’s works which is supplied by sea water from reservoir. The gate of reservoir will operate the gate to open in water width and angle of pen-stock speed water up to turn the turbine and spindle.

Moreover, to turning on the turbine, the spindle has to rotate which is possible by 2 ways in generator. The main rotation is entering waves from lower chamber to spin the spindle to upper chamber, and the rotation results the energy to turn on the turbine. Another way is upper chamber as air released which must circle the spindle, and this way is also will rise turbine and spindle.

As a result, when the turbine has produced electric power, generator will distribute its energy to power lines, and the rest will be released into river.

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