The idea of having a single carrer is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several carrer or ways of earning money of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
In olden days the computation of education was very less and employment was high. Because olden days few people were studing.But nowadays, people have developed and they all are giving more importance for studies. The education system also developed comparing to olden days. That's why the computation also increased. So people are chasing several career options.
Single carrer is old fashioned now several careers are new fashion or ways of earning money it is true. Because present days money earning is playing an important role in human being life because not only survival but also luxurious life. So in this way people are choosing several career options. The computation also one main reason to people are choosing several caerer opions. For example nowadays, Students are thinking mostly two way career like Professional and Business. So they all are planning their career after completed their plus two education.
First, most of the students are choosing professional carrer like enginnering. Because nowadays, this is more popular for student career opition. And next, most of the student's career option is business like MBA. The only reason is compotation. In this two way career they all are balancing their life. And they are managing computation also and earning money also high. Some people like reading and they are passion about rading. So they like to do further education always and this is continues throughout life.
Conclusion, the two way career is always good thing. Nowadays, to face this computation this is essential. Now entire globe is following this trend.
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Sentence: And next most of the students carrier option is business like MBA.
Suggestion: And next, most of the students' career option is business like MBA.
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Sentence: And next most of the students carrier option is business like MBA.
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Sentence: In olden days the compotation of education was very less and employement was high.
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Sentence: That's why the compotation also increased.
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Sentence: So people are chosing several carrer options.
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Sentence: Single carrer is old fashioned now several carrers are new fashion or ways of earning money it is true.
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Sentence: So in this way people are chosing several carrer options.
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Sentence: The compotation also one main reason to people are chosing several carrer opions.
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Sentence: For example nowadays, Students are thinking mostly two way carrer like Professional and Business.
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Sentence: So they all are planning their carrer after completed their plus two education.
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Sentence: First, most of the students are chosing professional carrier like enginnering.
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Sentence: Because nowadays, this is more popular for student carrier opition.
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Sentence: The only reason is compotation.
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Sentence: And they are managing compotation also and earning money also high.
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Sentence: Nowadays, to face this compotation this is essential.
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Sentence Length SD: 4.396 7.5
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