International travelers can cause problems to the countries to which they travel.On the other hand,international travelers can bring real advantages with them. Are the problem international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?
By the advent of globalization,industrialization and increased tourism promotion,many people have started travelling across the world very frequently. These international travels can have both positive and negative impacts on the host world.In this essay i am going to stress much on the advantages of international tourism than its minor drawbacks.
International travels are beneficial to both the travelers and the host nations in several aspects such as social,financial and educational.It helps to understand different lifestyles of different societies, and people are a...
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