The internet is becoming more and more control to our lives, as it provides more and more information, acts as a means of voting, etc.. these functions have obvious benefits, but there are dangers involved in the control the internet’s exerting over our lives. -What benefits are involved? - What dangers are involved? - How far do you agree and disagree with the opinion expressed?
In this modern world, with the advancement in technology make people to learn and analyze the things. So, internet plays an essential role in every individual life. If people feel any dubious in any aspect or in their fields. People prefer to check the most trusted websites and gets a lots of information rather than to ask concerned persons who has knowledge in their respective fields.
Firstly, the information provided through internet will be beneficial sometimes. For example:society can further enhance its progress and development mainly depending upon the political leader we opt. Before electing a person, we should judge whether he is the right person or not. The information coming from the internet will be helpful because the internet provide the facts which are true and reality. Sometimes the internet provide the news how the leaders are ruling. So it asks the people to vote for them. The percentage of the people elected will dislay on the respetive websites.
Secondly, on the other hand the information provided make some people to take their decisions and it sometimes dangerous to us for example:in our area one person had accident on the road. They took the hospital and the doctor who was maladroit to his profession took the patient to the operation theatre. By studying the medical related websites he was performing the operation which was not successful people belonged to the patient complaint against the doctor and he is punished. Not only that, the persons who had malfeasance behaviour can misuse the internet. The nefarious person may prepare the bomb by studying the chemical properties and composition which is dangerous to one's country.
In conclusion the matter which are confidential should not revealed through internet. But the information helpful to the society and beneficial to humans can display through this internet. Such that the society will lead a peaceful and comfortable life.
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Sentence: The information coming from the internet will be helpful because the internet provide the facts which are true and reality.
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Sentence: Sometimes the internet provide the news how the leaders are ruling.
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