By investing in tourism, we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy at the same time it damages the local culture. What is your opinion?
Tourism is one of the major industries of a nation. With the advancement of technology nowadays, the world has shrunk, meaning now it possible to travel to far-off corners of the world with ease and comfort. With globalization, more and more people are now willing to traverse the length and breadth of the world to become globe –trotters.
Tourism plays a vital role in the economic growth of any nation. It is a great source of revenue generation not only from the indigenous population of the nation, but also from foreign nationals visiting the various tourist destinations. India is a land ...
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