It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
People have diffirent views about whether children’s talents is innate or they need to be taught. In my opinion, sucesses of every individuals people is the combination of heredity factors and continuous practicing.
On the one hand, some are convinced that children and their talents are born together. Many well-known athletes, excellent musicians are frequently recognized as people that were born for there areas of art or sport. Obviously, any child, who has inherited talents via its parents’s genes, can be beneficial in way of being expert in some particular areas, compared with the re...
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Sentence: In my opinion, sucesses of every individuals people is the combination of heredity factors and continuous practicing.
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Sentence: Many well-known athletes, excellent musicians are frequently recognized as people that were born for there areas of art or sport.
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Sentence: Hence, if an individuals person wish to be expert in any field, he/she have to expect to his inherited abilities.
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Suggestion: Refer to individuals and person
Sentence: People have diffirent views about whether children's talents is innate or they need to be taught.
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Sentence: In my opinion, sucesses of every individuals people is the combination of heredity factors and continuous practicing.
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