Keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century.
Visions of human being changed to believe that animals suppose to live in their universe, not in zoos. It becomes controversial issues because of numerous people thought that breeding animals is one of cruelty.
Varieties of issue that surround zoos assist society who declares as anti-zoos to protest that breading animals on high-protection area is cruelty. They believe that it becomes main reason why most animals in zoos do not able to act like in their real ecosystem. For instance, a lion which lives in zoo have difference attitude from a lion which lives in wild habitat. A lion which sle...
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