Keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century. How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this world, there are two places for animals to live: zoo and nature. Zoo is a place for conserving some beasts. It has many facilities, which can support to create homely location for animals. The exposures of services include foods, caring, and protection. The existence of the zoo in keeping animals, especially rare wildlife, is significant. At the same time, some people think that saving animals in the zoo is cruel.
Some people who accept with zoo will save animals especially scarce wildlife think that it will protect them from disaster and their enemy. Then, the zoo can become educat...
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