In many cities crimes is increasing Why do you think this is happening What can government do to help reduce the crime levels Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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In many cities crimes is increasing.

Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the crime levels? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Now, crime is almost every where in our country and it can't be controlled easily so agreeing with the statement that crime is growing in the cities of our world.

Crime rates are much higher in big cities than in smaller ones or rural areas, mega cities are facing these crime activities on account of a number of social and economical factors. With the rapid urbanization and development of the world, the rates of crime is also on the rise. This phenomenal rise in crimes is becoming a great matter of concern and we have to deal with it instantly.

The frequent and repeated thefts, burglaries, robberies, murders, rapes, shoplifting, drug abuse, illegal trafficking, smuggling, etc, resulted in common citizens having restless days. They feel very insecure in the presence of antisocial and evil elements.

Recently, the Tan door murder case shocked the whole world and now this balboa srivastava's case and involvement of many leaders has come to light. The people should rise to fight political patronage of criminals. Corrupt politicians should be denied party tickets and party positions.. The police and the government should be alert about such cases and to not be afraid of these politicians.

Unemployment and frustration among youth have contributed much to the rise in crimes. Government should provide free education system for poor urban citizens and also provide them jobs in sectors where they can earn money, this will stop crime to an extend. Secondly, government should pass a low on identity verification of servants like no house owner will give to a servant who doesn't have any registered identification or a full address.

Moreover, government should take some legal action on criminal such as police should be allowed to shoot these criminal at sight of crime and administration should be on regular check to track out these crimes before they take place. Unless government doesn't take any step cities will remain polluted by crimes.

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