Many countries host international sporting events these days.What are the positive and negative impacts of hosting such events.Discuss both sides and give yous opinion.
Games play a phenomenal role in our life.Games and sports inculcate various aptitude in a person and also help us for our physical as well as social growth.That is why,nowadays,various countries are hosting international sporting events.However,some proportion of masses assert that these events have positive impacts on country while other have conflicting views about these events.Here,I would like to discuss both sides of this statement with my own perception.
To begin with,some people considered that these sporting events have positive impact on country.First and foremost,the people of country aware about the importance of games.In present time,new generation is fond of drugs by these events they aware and participate in that events.Moreover,by these events,a good player show his talent or his interest in games.finally,the economy of a country become more sound.For instance,to see these events many foreigner come in that country with hard currency,consequently,country become more strong in finance.
Contrary,some people have conflicting views.They assumed these events are not lucrative for a country.Firstly,they think government waste a lot of money on these events by which the economy of a country affected.To illustrate a survey conducted by Times of India has revealed that to offer vintage amenities to players and foreigner,huge amount of money is invested which affect the economy of a country.Hancemore,due to these events crime is more because some people do betting and eke out money through various illegal methods.Therefore,they considered these events have detrimental impacts on country.
In my notion,I would like to say that by organizing these events we can aware the people of a country from drugs and other narcotic things.Next,games and sports is only a way to learn the lesson of win and loss,thus,these events helpful for a country and government should be organised these events.
As per my above discussion, it is evident that these events are lucrative for both country and its people as well.It's advantages are outweigh the disadvantages,so ,government should organised these events.
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Sentence: It's advantages are outweigh the disadvantages, so, government should organised these events.
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