In many countries, the proportion of older people is increasing steadily. Do you think its is a positive or negative change to the society.
It is true that there has been a growing concern about the increasing number of the elderly in several nations across the world. While many people argue that this trend means better living standards as well as increased life expectancy which are positive signals, others believe that it is problematic. Personally, I agree with the latter idea for certain reasons.
To begin with, a potential negative impact of an old society is a crisis of labour. The fact remains that if senior citizens account for a large proportion of the society, the workforce will be affected in terms of quantity and qual...
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Sentence: While many people argue that this trend means better living standards as well as increased life extectancy which are positive signals, others believe that is is problematic.
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Sentence: While many people argue that this trend means better living standards as well as increased life extectancy which are positive signals, others believe that is is problematic.
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Sentence: The elderly is generally reagarded as a burden to family, putting high pressure on working people.
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Sentence: Obviously, old-aged pensioners rely on social wellfare from the governments.
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