In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In many countries all over the world, students at school have a variety of severe problems related to their behavior. Because these type of problems are not usually controlled by teachers, director and other staff, students are facing more and more with them. There are several reasons why problems with student behavior occur. This essay will have a closer look to causes of severe problems and some possible solutions would be suggested.

Firstly, I think the main reason why severe problems occur is not correct order of hours at which students are starting their school day. Some begin early in the morning, others in a midday. In this case, different age students are meeting with each other at break time. Someone’s style of clothing, exam results, even the long queue at school wardrobe and canteen can be causes of problems between students. Secondly, especially primary school children are too young to decide whether something is good or bad. And the way they behave is directly depending on their surroundings. And finally, some type of problems are occuring because of not satisfactory grades and exam results. Let’s take a boy who is very hard-working and successful as an example. If one day he gets unwanted mark or bad quiz results, of course, he will get very angry and mad. Sometimes this can lead to problems, so that after unexpected results student will just annoy and destroy everything.

What can we do in order to avoid severe problems? The most obvious solution in this case is just to put a right order to studying hours, so that different age children won’t conflict with each other.

To conclude, I think none of solutions could stop severe problems to occur. Because students won’t just listen and do what others say, who ever it will be.

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