In many countries schools have severe problems with students’ behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Students spend most of their time at school. That is why it is called as the second home of them. They study, play and socialize at school. Therefore, school can be a great place to mold up the students’ behavior.
Anyway, in some countries, schools get some problems related to students’ behavior. At those schools, a number of students show disrespectful attitude toward their teachers. Even, there are repeated cases of students killing teachers happened.
There are some reasons that cause it. The first is the lack of communication between students and teachers. Some teache...
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