Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines Has it brought more advantages than disadvantages

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Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Has it brought more advantages than disadvantages?

Last century has witnessed peoples’ living standards have also been improved due to the advances of technology, such as the machines that used in daily lives, in the home. However, some drawbacks emerges along with the merits, like unhealthy lifestyle.

It cannot be denied that the machines, nowadays, play a vital role in the home for several reasons. To begin with, they are much more efficient than human beings in terms of household routines, in both time and economic respect. For example, by using wash machine, a basket of cloths can be washed at one time, rather than by hands, which saves householders’ time from washing cloth one by one and cost from using less water. In addition, it is the machines that more accurate than humans, which can be proved clearly in the kitchen. Both time and temperature can be set upon the microwaves to ensure the food taste according to the instructions. On the contrast, individuals can merely determine how much the food need to by cooked by instincts and experience.

The demerits that the machines caused cannot be neglected as well, especially this tendency is on an increasing rate. The most noticeable and significant influence is that it may lead to an unhealthy life style. Since more work can be done by machines even without monitoring, people at home have less opportunities to exercise and incline to purchase and utilize more equipment that can bring convenience and less labour work. Secondly, an array of simple household work can be educational for children’s growing up. In other words, parents can give children pocket money in exchange of work done perfectly or have improved in progress.

Thanks to the technological development, we are enjoying the convenience of modern machines by their efficiency and accuracy. However, people should be educated and raised the awareness to exercise to avoid the sedentary life style and render it as education perspective that brought by frequent using.

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