Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.
Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Everybody have known a lot of famous people in her or his life. Actually we love these people and we are curious about every detail of their live. For example, what they do, what are their favorite foods, or colors or sports. Many public media such as magazines and newspapers have covered all news about these people.
Some people think, it does not good for newspapers to publish these kind of information. In my opinion, I agree with this idea. I think newspapers should focus on publish most important news happen in our society. People always buy newspapers to read most important news about politics, market, finance, sports and everything that happen in their society. Newspaper can publish news about something happen in professional life of famous people not news about their personal life.
Every magazines work in different field such as science, sports, art, cooking, puzzle. On the other hand, I think magazines can publish these kind of information about personal life of famous people. But it is very appropriate that magazines publish news about social life of these people instead of new about personal life. Everybody has a privacy and we do not allow to enter in privacy area. The news that magazines are published impact on personal life of famous people. Sometimes these news do not real and are rumor so have bad effect on professional life of these people.
In conclusion, In my view, magazines must be sure about every kind of news that are published. they do not allowed publish gossip or rumor.
Some people think, it does not good for newspapers...
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Sentence: I think newspapers should focus on publish most important news happen in our society.
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Sentence: Newspaper can publish news about something happen in professional life of famous people not news about their personal life.
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Sentence: In conclusion, In my view, magazines must be sure about every kind of news that are published. they do not allowed publish gossip or rumor.
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