The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map is of the town Garlsdon . They are going to build a new supermarket. The map illustrates two places where they could build the supermarket.
One of the places is located in the centre of the town , in town centre. Near the posible supermarket there goes a train from Hondon population to Cransdon town. Industry is situated on the Southern and Northern sides of the supermarket. There is also a road alongside the supermarket.
The second choice is to build shop on the Western side in countryside . It also near the railway . Hondon population the closest place to the supermarket about 12 km and have to their people opportunity to get to supermarket by either train or car.
In conclusion, it is true that the supermarket which located at the center have better place than the another
Sentence: Hondon population the closest place to the supermarket about 12 km and have to their people opportunity to get to supermarket by either train or car.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and opportunity
Sentence: Near the posible supermarket there goes a train from Hondon population to Cransdon town.
Error: posible Suggestion: possible
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.427 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.63 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.714 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 50
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.608 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
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