The mass media, including television,radio and newspaper have a great influence in the shopping peoples ideas. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
One of the most popular issues in society today is social media which can persuade human in their daily activities. It will be awkward for modern society, if they do not know about social media. It is true that mass media has a big effect in the human life especially shopping peoples ideas. Although some people agree with this statement, I believe that it can be persuaded in the other sectors which have a lot of advantages for society.
Some people argue that social media can be influence people in the shopping ideas. They think that mass media has a lot of advertisements about new products or interesting place which can be interest people to buy or visit everything about the advertisement. For example, when a pupils saw advertisement about new shoes in television suddenly he asked his parents to buy it. Not only social will persuades about necessary but it can be influence lifestyle also. The advertisement uses interesting place and a good people where they want to get much money. They use pretty or handsome entertainer to make viewer or reader for consuming or imitating their product.
Beside , social media gives lots of benefits which can help people to follow the modern era. They can use social media to know good news in the world everywhere they want. Not only in their country,they can get information but also information from the other countries. The mass media can be influence viewer to get a good job that will help their future life. Because of social media gives service about politic,education,business and so on.
In conclusion, people can be influence with easier by social media. Especially in their shopping ideas that people should pressure to decrease their desirability .
I believe that it can be persuade in the other sectors...
I believe that it can be persuaded in the other sectors
Some people argue that social media can be influence people in the shopping ideas.
Some people argue that social media can influence people in the shopping ideas.
interesting place which could be interest people to buy or visit
interesting place which could interest people to buy or visit
Not only social persuades about necessary but it can be influence lifestyle also.
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Not only in their country,they can get information but also information from the other countries.
Description: not only ... but also ... is not used properly
people can be influence with easier by social media.
people can be influenced easily by social media.
Sentence: Especially in their shopping ideas that people should pressure to decrease their desirability .
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