Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past many people still used a difficult manner to connect to the other people. A traditional manner was used Carrier Pigeon and Postman. It’s used for people who want to send a letter who needed much time. Technology will get more and more advances.
Internet can be used to communicate the other people in the world. Many people use internet to spend their time. Nowadays, especially in the big cities, we often see people in hurry. They have busy activities to control they schedule. If you want to meet the other people, sending a massage is very helpful, more over is suddenly.
With Internet invention, sending a message with internet and mobile phone are easier than in the past and also communication with email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people. Sending email and massage very give assist to your duty. If your clients in the far area or in the other countries, this is very helpful. And the other case, sending email with internet and mobile phone is very practice and help a thousand of jobseeker to apply their application to the companies.
Sometimes, some people who live in metro city are very busy. There are several negative effects for user in the social life. Users spend their free time in front of computer and mobile phone. So, if people didn’t meet their friends. It is makes your friends to keep away from you. People have to be very creatively to manage their time. In fact, using mobile phones is very helpful, but not to interfere with your social life.
To conclude, I agree communication such as email and messaging has reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. But, in this modern era people are necessary use internet access for sending emails, and messages. So, people must be smart to maintenance their time.
Sentence: They have busy activities to control they schedule.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and schedule
Sentence: If you want to meet the other people, sending a massage is very helpful, more over is suddenly.
Description: The fragment is suddenly . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace suddenly with adjective
Description: The fragment more over is is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace over with adjective
Sentence: It is makes your friends to keep away from you.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and makes
Sentence: People have to be very creatively to manage their time.
Description: The fragment very creatively to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace creatively with adjective
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Sentence Length SD: 5.97 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 159 200
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